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MY RELAXATION (MUSIC)


 They say music is the soul of life and music as a hobby is quite popular among people of various ages. Music is a way to express someone's feelings which if they cannot be put into words. That's why when I feel a bit stress, music is my way to go to relax my self. 
      First, I've got my favorite music instrument which is Guitar. Since the first time my parent bought me a guitar when I was 14, I already fall in love with this instrument because it can make me feel peaceful and since then I always use guitar to relief my self when I have a rough day.
     Then I have my favorite music genre which is Jazz. Jazz is so calming. It’s peaceful, and beautiful music. I love the sounds mixed together, and to me- the mix of the sax and the trumpet, piano, chello, et cetera are so great together and make the style so unique to itself. So many artists came from nothing to jazz, and it speaks to so many people. God. I love hearing it. And, I feel like it can go with any and all emotion. 
     And last is I have my favorite musician which are John Mayer and Ed Sheeran. The lyric that they wrote on their music have a huge meaning on my life. I don't know why, but their music really touch my heart especially the music "photograph" by Ed. The song talks about trying to preserve their love in a picture so that the romance's beauty will remain with them forever. So that's a few reason why I love music so much and it can make feel so relax and peaceful. 

Comments

  1. Overall good, but I suggest to adding more sentences on the conclusion ^^

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  2. I am so appreciate your essay, overall is good but you can add again major supporting ideas. Thank you, have a nice day

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  3. Well your essay was really good and actually I love music also, just like you.

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  4. I agree with you music can make us feels relax and peaceful , by the way your essay very good

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  5. I see that you really like music that much. i like to hear jazz songs, too! you can deliver about your interest in music into sentences nicely. But, it would be better if you make the topic sentence clearer because it is a little bit too general. Goodluck, friend!

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  6. that's true music is good entertainment for us if you have hard day then you can hear music so it can make you relax, btw your essay is good but for background that you get know first about music must more detail i think.

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  7. What a good essay! I like music either, but were on different genre. Anyway, the topic sentence that you wrote still vogue. Next time try to be more specific. Keep up the good work!

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  8. what a beautiful paragraph! i can really relate to it in my daily life. keep up the good work!

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