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TOPIC :
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How has the globalization changed Indonesia Especially in Transportation site.
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Supporting Example 1
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Globalization has change the way people Driving.
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Supporting Example 2
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Globalization has become the pioneer to make transportation much more
efficient and eco-friendly.
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Supporting Example 3
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Globalization has made people more easier and secure to use Public
Transportation.
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Concluding Text
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Well in general, Globalization has made a huge impact on a country
especially for the people and the way they use transportation on their
everyday life . So basically Globalization brings so many positivity for a
country.
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